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[Wooden Jimmy; Demo]

Not great

Several problems:
-There doesn't seem to be any way to avoid the red balls; they will always wing you somehow. Makes the game awkward to play.
-No way to recover health. Not even by falling off and starting again.
Apart from that, a half-decent first attempt, I guess.

lucabtje responds:

wut? no way of dodging the balls? jump when there at the highest point!

[mr piggy: space adventure]

Needs work

You were certainly right about the audio. Man, that was something else...
The gameplay itself works, but it's just too simplistic. I think you need to start learning some proper AS rather than keep using The Games Factory, otherwise your games just won't progress. It's helped you get started, now it's up to you to make sure you don't get stuck there.

biosfreak responds:

i just keep makeing game factory games until i know everything about it
you can compare it to an RPG when your lvl 1 you first train till your 100% of level 2 and then you can wield level 2 swords
so i first want 100%
and its not that i make games for fame or money i make games for fun and makeing friends

[Advanced Sprites Tutorial]

Good but a little sketchy,

The basics were covered brilliantly but there wasn't anything there that could be considered advanced. I also felt that the tips regarding humour at the end were disguised indirect attacks on other spriters, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt...

TIP: An easy way to center objects is by pressing ctrl+k and aligning it to the center.

7/10

PaperBat responds:

Im not going to lie, your flash WAS what reminded me of the humor, but no, it wasent directed at you. so your ok.

As for CTRL+K, Thanks, I never knew that :)

[Video Games Tycoon V1.1]

Good

It was a great way to kill 20 minutes but had no replay value. Also, the $10,000 button can be clicked multiple times. Just click 'states' or another button, then click back to 'upgrades', voila! It's back. Also, money just rolls in after a while, and the main problem is you can't spend it fast enough. Apart from that, very good.

MarioFlashMovies responds:

WT*?

[FPS in Real Life 5]

Took it too far

1 was original. 2 was ok. 3 was too far. 4 was way too far. 5 was just plain terrible. Nothing new (apart from some weird zombies) and you need to find a new game to do in real life because the idea of having a game in real life was pretty good.

Aerdail responds:

Then there is no pleasing you

Ya, I have some other ideas for real life games