For a first attempt, this is pretty good! All the sprites were clean, sounds and lip syncing were sound (that's usually where PW submissions fall down). I'll be keeping an eye on your future efforts!
Mmmm that's good sattire!
Voice acting was well done, although the 'accent guy' might have worked better with a thicker accent, and I actually quite liked the art style. And it was pretty funny to boot! Nice one!
Thanks! I actually just used my dad's normal voice for the accent man, hoping his accent (which I don't really hear, myself) would be stronger than what I can hear. I'll keep in mind that his accent isn't really that strong xD. But thanks for the review, man!
I enjoyed it! I liked the concept (seriously, what's up with bushes? Losers!) and the comic timing was close to impeccable. The animation was also smooth and didn't cut corners.
Really nice job, mate, I look forward to seeing what else you can come up with!
I can relate!
I too had some turkey and mashed potatoes and then started seeing extraordinary colours.
Nice one. You the man etc.
I like the art style, and I won't criticise the writing too much seeing as it's your first attempt.
It's a good first crack, I'd like to see you do more work in this style. Nice one.
Thoroughly enjoyed that, the humour was well executed, the voices were spot on and overall, the animation was well done; it had some South Park qualities to it, which is no bad thing of course.
Give yourselves a pat on the back, I really look forward to seeing the rest.
Thanks, Really appreciate the feedback
Some solid laughs in there, good variety and a nice tribute to a top fella. I like :]
...but not terrible, for a first flash. Things to work on:
-Higher frame rate for smoother animation.
-More attention to scale. The ground sprites looked a little bit squashed.
-More original jokes (OMG Luigi died, why didn't I think of that...)
If you work at it, you can improve. You just need to put in the time.
The jokes were a little sketchy, but they brought a smile to ones face in places. The animation was off (when animating walking inside movieclips, check it looks realistic: in the first scene, when Kirby was walking towards the Mushroom, the walking animation was way too fast.) Plus, the Kirby sprite was a bit squashed. If you were using a scripted camera, make sure the ratios of the two sides fit with the canvas size. Apart from that, pretty good.
For the most part the animation was good, although the sprites were a touch distorted. The main problem was the sound (and lip syncing was off) was rather crude. Yoshi's screaming was very loud and blew my speakers out. Ok they didn't really, but you catch my drift.
It was all good apart from that.
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